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02 July 2006 @ 05:49 pm
 

I hate my computer. I have broadband but my computer's like...twelve years old so it is almost as bad as dial up...

Rating: Two Kirema Anima - A Pain
Title: Yokohama Mews
Suethor Author: Rebecca012
Name(s): Kuroichigo Daijo, bonus Sue is Tayen Kineks and Aolani
Species: all human except for Aolani. She's an alien
Hair color:
Kuroichigo - not said
Tayen - thick dark brown hair
Aolani - blonde
Eye color:
Kuroichigo - not said
Tayen - ''small dark eyes''
Aolani - not said
Markings: none
Possessions: none
Connections to Canon: It's ANOTHER NextGen fic but this is two years after the original Mew Mew project.
Annoying Tidbit: There is a sentence in the fic that says 'When...Two years after the organ el Mew project...' Organ el'? It's not actually annoying but kinda funny. Organs....heheh...
Mew Mew Genes and Abilities: I'm guessing it will be a rabbit. *sigh* Rabbits are so abused...
Mew Mew Outfit: N/A

Wow. My first Native American Sue....who knew?


On her way home she stopped by her new favorite Cafe that she just found last week while walking home. He walked up the path way to find that th closed sign was out.

“Man, that suck es! I was hoping to get a snake. Oh well.”

She said walking away. But as she walked away the sky over head turned dark and a blue light came from the Cafe. Kuroichigo turned around and saw the light. She was so scared she couldn't move. Then the light hit her and she screamed and closed her eyes. When she opened them she saw a white rabbit staring at her down by her feet. She beaned down and petted it.

“What a cute rabbit. But were did it come from?”

She said picking it up, but Then it jumped inside her. Kuroichigo's eyes widened as she watched this happen. The next thing she knew she was back in front of the Cafe. And the sky was blue again. She looked around to look for the little white rabbit then remembered it went inside her. She decided she was day dreaming it.

“I mean, its not like that really happened. Right?”

she said to her self.

The next day she rushed down stairs in a new jean skirt and light orange shirt on with lace around the collar, she as had a soft yellow sweater tied around her waist.

She had overslept and thought she was late even know it was only 3:20. She rushed past her mother and father in the dinning room eating, she yelled good bye to them then yelled wish me luck to her brother as she pasted him in the hall.

She decided to take a shortcut thought the park since she still thought she was late. When she was in the park she kept getting a feeling she was being watched so she kept looking behind her. She was right about being watched because when she stopped to rest she hurried a voice behind her,

“What, your tired all ready?”

She looked all around her but saw no one,

“Who said that?”

“I did, up here.”

She looked up into a tree and saw a little girl with blond hair and pointy ears smiling at her.

“Who the heck are you?”

“My names Aolani, and I'm here to kill you. Shocking huh?”

 
 
How am I feeling? I feel: aggravatedaggravated
I'm listening to : Who Are You - The Who// aka the CSI theme song
 
 
 
sleeves on July 2nd, 2006 10:37 pm (UTC)
Native American abuse! Call the Patch! +shot for ManKin joke+ D:

wtf is with this sue's writing? "sucks es," "organ el." WHAT.

I hate my computer. I have broadband but my computer's like...twelve years old so it is almost as bad as dial up...

I know how you feel... >:
Sunzi: Official Tokyo Mew Mew Sue Sporker: Retasutokyomew_sues on July 2nd, 2006 10:56 pm (UTC)
Jack Spicer! *icon love*

Yeah and in my own state too. Poor Virginia...
rainejoybringer: pic#48553689rainejoybringer on July 6th, 2006 12:39 pm (UTC)
And yet another reason why I'm feeling sad for one of my first anime fandoms...
「someone oughta open up a window 」: Jack Sparrowsinging_monk on July 7th, 2006 12:49 pm (UTC)
I'm going to be kind with the mangled English and assume that it's not her first language, but the rest of the fic...

Bleh. It leaves a bad aftertaste in my mouth. XP
First Name Last Namechaos_sama9 on November 15th, 2006 12:55 am (UTC)
Gah, this gives me a headache. BURN IT WITH FIRE!!! Leave my ancestors out o' this, m'kay? And I don't mean just the NA part - I mean the VA part too. God, those aren't even Native American names T.T
beqabase on April 9th, 2011 01:10 pm (UTC)
great post as usual!

vukecard on April 14th, 2011 03:32 pm (UTC)
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